Fall Girl
by Laird Long
i’m at the backdoor of mom’s...i mean, lee’s house
good girl! i’m on the street in my own car a couple of houses down. keeping watch.
the backdoor is unlocked. don’t ask me how it got that way. ;-)
i know lee had something to do with mom’s death
i couldn’t prove it, as a police officer. but maybe you can.
i loved mom so much :’(
and...i know how much u loved her too daryl
you’re a smart girl, Kat ;-)
their marriage was on the rocks. Valerie was sure Lee was seeing someone else...that he was after your mom’s insurance money.
ok. i’m inside the house
see what you can find, Kat. there must be something. on a computer, maybe.
connecting Lee to another woman, implicating him in your mom’s death
i’m in the spare bedroom. don’t see any computer. i’m going through desk drawers
be careful. put everything back just as you found it.
i don’t see anything incriminating
i’m in their bedroom now – his bedroom. going through the chest of drawers
find anything?
checking the closet...
anything?
Kat?
YES a small laptop! hidden away in the floor heat vent under a bunch of boxes!
good! your mom said you were a computer expert
i’ve been hacking since high school ;-)
LOL
how’s it going?
Kat?
i’m in! i easily broke lee’s password and encrypted email :-)
you work fast
maybe i should work for the police
look out, Kat! Lee just pulled up into the driveway! he’s come back from work early!
OMG you were right daryl! there’re all kinds of emails between lee and a woman – tiffany!
Lee’s walking towards the front door, Kat.
get out, Kat! you’re in danger!
Lee’s inside of the house!
i need you to GET OUT OF THE HOUSE NOW KAT!
he was having an affair with tiffany alright
he tells her ‘they’ll be together soon’ and ‘we won’t have to worry about money anymore’...
four months ago – just before mom died
this is evidence daryl!
Lee’s in the living room, Kat. grab the laptop and get out through the back – the way you came in.
NOW!
Kat?
Kat!?
he’s here in the bedroom with me daryl!
where are you?
KAT!?
i’m up in the attic now
there’s a trapdoor in the ceiling of the closet. i climbed up
he’s talking on the phone – with tiffany.
he’s laughing about mom’s ‘tragic fall’.
how he ‘helped the bitch along’.
i’m recording it on my phone. more evidence daryl!
stay quiet. he’ll probably
whoops
what happened, Kat!?
oh no
what’s happening, Kat!?
KAT!?
KAT!?
a floorboard squeaked when i shifted. he heard me.
what’s going on!?
i’m coming in, Kat!
NO you’ll ruin the investigation – compromise the evidence.
i’m in here illegally remember?
i’m not going to let Lee hurt you, Kat. like he did your mom.
it’s okay! stay where u r!
i pulled up the trapdoor. i’m holding it shut
he’s yelling and swearing, banging on the trapdoor. but he can’t get at me.
what’s happening now, Kat!?
he seems to have given up
we’ve got him daryl! he’s the one trapped! with these emails and the conversation i just recorded!
i knew Lee pushed your mom down the stairs. i knew it!!
despite the coroner ruling it an ‘accidental’ fall. and despite Valerie’s history of balance problems
YES
crap
what!?
i smell smoke!
i feel heat – against the trapdoor!
OMG he’s trying to burn me out daryl!
he never did like this old house! mom told me!
i’m coming in! i’ve got my gun with me!
WAIT our case will fall apart if you expose yourself!
the evidence will be inadmissible if it’s shown we obtained it illegally!
Kat, he’ll claim some sort of electrical fire and kill two birds with one stone –
get rid of the house and you at the same time!
i’m coming in!
NOW
NO there must be a way out of this attic.
ok. i can see a diamond-shaped air vent on the side of the house, attic level – east wall.
find it, Kat! GET OUT
i’m looking. i don’t see it. there’s so much junk up here!
east-facing wall. HURRY!
i see smoke! it’s getting hot!
Kat!?
KAT!?
I’M COMING TO GET YOU!
NO i found the vent! behind an old bureau.
i’ll kick it out. it’s small.
you’re small, like your mom. and brave, like your mom.
Kat!?
i kicked it out! i think i can squeeze through and climb onto the roof
Lee just came out of the house, Kat! i can see you – he can see you!
he’s got a gun!
i’m going to get him!
he’s not going to get you, too, Kat!
WAIT i crawled to the other side of the roof! it’s shielding me!
what are you going to do!?
i’m...wait - i know!
the leung’s have a swimming pool next door – on the west side. and there’s a high fence around their backyard.
Lee’s heading for the rear of the house, Kat! he’ll be able to see you!
i’m going to jump from the roof to the pool!
NO, KAT! TOO DANGEROUS! STAY UP ON THE ROOF! THE OTHER SIDE!
I’M COMING TO GET YOU!
i threw lee’s laptop down onto the grass next door!
meet me at the end of the block daryl!
i’m going to jump!!
KAT!
see u soon!!
i’ll be waiting, Kat! to take you home.
and put Lee in jail!
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