The Five Year Promise - Part 5
by Wesley Hopper
Are you here yet?
Not yet. We’re in the car.
I’ve got butterflies.
Yeah, my stomach probably resembles a pretzel.
Can you believe the reunion is at the same bar as Thanksgiving Eve 2014?
I can. The universe works in surprising ways.
Think our plan will work?
Should we go over it one more time?
All right. Step one, we get rid of the pretenders.
Karen and Writer Guy.
His name is Justin.
He’ll always be Writer Guy to me.
Still can’t believe they’re bringing them!
It’s a defense mechanism. They don’t want to appear alone.
Whatever. So we distract Justin and Karen.
So that the waiter delivers two cards.
Each from a secret admirer ;-)
Who wants to meet them upstairs.
Okay, so they both go upstairs.
To find one final card addressed to both of them.
Explaining the entire mix-up.
And underneath, Andy’s engagement ring.
Can’t believe you found it!
I’ve become quite good at snooping since we started this little endeavor. :)
Glad I taught you something ;)
And after that?
They realize it’s all been a big mistake and that Andy was going to propose.
You think he’ll propose right there?!
If they truly love each other and they’re meant to be, he’ll give her the ring.
Or they’ll realize we’re behind all this and hate us forever.
There is that possibility.
It’s all or nothing.
Huge gamble.
Well, it’s been a pleasure to have you as my partner in crime, partner.
You too, partner. :)
Remember, we can’t seem like we’ve been in touch when we see each other.
I’ll play it cool.
We’re parking.
Andy and Karen just got here. We’re going in.
Us too. :-0
It looks exactly the same! Where are you?
By the snack area. You?
The bar. Becca just met Justin there.
Ok. Time to initiate phase one.
Ditch the dates.
How’s it going?
I told Karen I have a writer friend I want her to meet.
Justin’s not really your friend. You don’t even know him!
Little white lie.
How’s it going on your end?
I told Justin there’s someone who’s a big fan of his…
I don’t think she knows who he is!
Does it matter?
All right. Now let’s get them together so they keep each other busy.
We’re headed your way.
Don’t let Andy see Becca yet!
Don’t worry! Send Karen over.
Where? Wait. I think I see you.
I think I see you.
You look…
You’ve lost the mustache.
Yeah. It was a phase.
You said I looked…
Great. You look, great.
Thanks.
Really great.
Aw. Thanks. ;)
Wait. Where’s Karen?
Oh, crap. She got away.
I don’t see Justin either.
Becca and Andy???
This place is so crowded!
If they all bump into each other again it’s going to ruin it!
I KNOW. I’m looking!!!
When is the waiter delivering the cards???
Anytime now! I told him to look at their name tags.
They can’t see each other getting their cards!
I see Andy and Becca. THEY’RE BACK TO BACK!
They haven’t noticed yet!!!
Just get her away from him once the action starts.
The action? What are you talking about?
I’ve still got a couple of tricks up my sleeve.
Is the music getting louder???
Someone is dancing…OMG, BEN!!!
HAHA! It’s going to be hard to pull her away... :) !!!
Did it work?
Yes, we’re back at the bar. I said I had to tell her something.
What?
Doesn’t matter. They’re apart again.
Where did you learn to BREAK DANCE like that???
Oh, just a little something I picked up.
Ok, the waiter just delivered the card to Becca!
Where’s Justin?
HOVERING.
HE CAN’T SEE HER READING THE CARD!!!
I KNOW. What do I do?
GET RID OF HIM NOW!
Uh-oh…
KALI!!!
YOU PUNCHED HIM!
No, I ELBOWED him. By accident.
Remind me never to get in your way.
He’s gone isn’t he???
Yeah, I think he went to the bathroom to stop the bleeding.
What about Andy? Did he get his card?
Yes and it looks like Karen was too busy with the shrimp cocktail to notice.
Becca’s headed upstairs!!!
Andy is headed up the opposite side!! It’s working!!!
Should we go watch???
I almost don’t want to.
We have to. THIS IS IT.
Ok…Where are you?
I’m on the other side of the room. Can you see them?
Yes. They found the card.
The candles were a nice touch ;)
Thanks! They’re reading it.
GOD. I hope this works!!!
He sees the ring!
He’s picking it up!!!!!
Why are they just standing there???
No, they’re locking eyes.
They’re going in…
I think they might…
They’re actually going to!
HUG?!
OH, TOTAL HUG!
He’s pocketing the ring.
Uh-oh, she’s texting me.
He’s texting me…
The jig is up. :-(
Ben?
Hey.
Where are you?
Outside. Needed some fresh air.
They weren’t TOO mad.
Andy and Karen left. Apparently she’s allergic to shrimp.
Justin’s nose isn’t broken, so that’s good news. :)
I’m coming to find you. Where are you?
The park.
I really thought they still loved each other.
Look on the bright side. Andy’s going to be a published author.
And Becca’s getting her own art show. And they both found someone.
So we weren’t getting them back together…
We were helping them move on…
I have a confession.
What?
When you texted me the first time. I knew who you were.
What?!? Why did you pretend you didn’t?
I didn’t want you to know that I remembered.
That I’d been thinking about you since that night when we almost kissed in the gazebo.
Really?
I always regretted it.
Is that you by the gazebo now?
Yes.
Well, I haven’t been entirely honest with you either.
When I pulled Becca away tonight to tell her something important.
It wasn’t just a distraction.
I was telling her how I’d fallen for you.
Really?
Do you want to make-up for that regret now?
More than anything.
But you know what the legend says about kissing in the gazebo.
I do.
That doesn’t scare you?
Let’s just not call it a promise.
:-)
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